Logline Friday Winner – July 2nd, 2010

And the winner of Logline Friday for July 2nd, 2010 is…Todd Gordon!


@moviequill A hapless shoe salesman orders a “gardener” brain implant to impress his girlfriend but ends up with “killer assassin” instead.

It’s Total Recall meets True Lies! Or maybe it’s more comedic? Either way, it could be a hit.

While the logline tiptoes on the edge of “too derivative,” it feels original enough to potentially work.

So, congrats Todd! Todd wins free notes from Script Doctor Eric on the first 5 pages of his script!

Why the first 5 pages? Because they’re the most important.

Seriously.

And…

Onward!

-Eric

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